Her backstroke is effortless, in a red hat that looks like a marker buoy pulled along a taut thread, parallel to the dark shore. The tide plays with the final yard of sand, sweeping, rinsing. Keeps you guessing if you could walk there or not.
The swell came sudden, threw itself in. No warning crest surging towards me. Just a heavy landing. Intent.
Interesting to see how much water each shoe can hold, how much can be squeezed out of socks that cling to wet feet, how beautiful tide lines can be around the knees of jeans. I came up the hill home, too early for myself. I needed to get dry. I missed the precious early solitude of a holiday morning before the outdoor cafe made bacon sandwiches.
This morning, my shoes are still damp.
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A beauty. I can detect the scent
of seawater on your damp clothes
and the calm within you.
Various shades of grey are the colors of the sky here today. One can learn to see the beauty in it. I smile at the sea reaching out to baptize you….
I finally decided you have all the words and I just enjoy - if I could do a little painting to say how I felt reading this, it would have a burst of yellow all through it to say, so good!
Hi Cynthia. Yes. There was wonderful calm. I think part of me would have been happy to just stand there and let the tide wash over me.
Hi Leslie. The greys were very beautiful and calm yesterday. Pity I didn't get to sit and gaze for a bit longer.
Hi Jeane. Yes, please do just enjoy! Love the idea of the burst of yellow. Today was a very different day - a yellow and blue day. I planted potatoes. When I got home, yesterday's shoes were dry.
Annie, I was there right beside you...and got my shoes wet too :)
Thanks, Jo. Was a big wave to get both of us!
Well, this is just stunning and I for one, love shades of grey!
lovely and incredibly visual! makes me want to paint it!
~Calli
Hi Calli. Thank you very much. There have been some beautiful grey skies over the sea this week as we start to get some warmer weather.
Beautiful evocative piece of writing, Annie.
Hi Robyn. Thank you. Pleased you enjoyed it.
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